Recess

 

By Monica R

By Jun 08/2017

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Love this! At first I thought you had taken a shot while you were swimming and then realized you were looking up - so clever! The black vertical lines give this otherwise dreamy photo some drama. Good focus and white balance.

    Suggestions:

    Maybe I am being picky but I would have cropped out the upper right side as it is distracting to me.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    A fun take on the theme.  I appreciate that the face is revealed between the graphic lines.